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bobt
28-06-2018, 7:46am
I have two possible entries into a mono Open comp. Which one of the two do you like better?

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Gazza
28-06-2018, 7:52am
Hmmm, I'm preferring the 1st, Bob.
The slight incline and that smoke billowing from the funnel/exhaust is giving a real sense of power and purpose.



Cheers - :beer_mug:

Mary Anne
28-06-2018, 8:56am
I like #1 best too.. That smoke blowing all over the place as the train comes around the bend does it for me.

Glenda
28-06-2018, 10:11am
Another vote for #1

bobt
28-06-2018, 10:36am
I like #1 best too.. That smoke blowing all over the place as the train comes around the bend does it for me.

Well how very interesting. Every person I've asked has said the same thing, yet I liked number 2 ! I can see I'm too invested in number 2 and shall need to think again. Thanks!

ameerat42
28-06-2018, 10:58am
First I wasn't going to say anything :angry34: - I had no idea :o

But then I re-read your statement: for a "mono Open comp".

I still didn't want to say anything because I had to toss up between "like" and "prefer",
finally going for "prefer".

And so I "prefer" the first because it has a greater tonal range of "mono".

(Now if you could just clone out the 2nd set of rails to make it just one set :p)

Actually, maybe a small crop, as the closer rails are "in you face" a bit at the LHS :eek:

bobt
28-06-2018, 11:25am
And so I "prefer" the first because it has a greater tonal range of "mono".

(Now if you could just clone out the 2nd set of rails to make it just one set :p)

Actually, maybe a small crop, as the closer rails are "in you face" a bit at the LHS :eek:

You mean more like this ??? What would it take to move it from "prefer' to "like" ?? :confused013


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fillum
28-06-2018, 11:28am
Both good shots Bob. I probably have a slight preference for #2 as I like the human element and gesture and think there's a bit more 'story' to it. To my eye #2 also seems a bit 'crisper' somehow (more detail ?)

The image I'd submit would depend on whether the comp is decided by popular vote or by judges. For a popular vote comp I'd submit #1 as it's the 'classic' train shot with the billowing smoke which will have broad appeal. For a judged comp I'd go with #2 for the reasons I mentioned above and also because it's a bit different which might (?) appeal to a judge.

[#2 looks to lean slightly to the right, although could be an illusion]

Good luck...



Cheers.

ameerat42
28-06-2018, 11:30am
^Yes, pretty much like that. Now the train's much "closer".

I can "like" the 2nd for its "grungy", "industrial revolution" presentation.
As well, there is "little drama" about the action of the figure there.
And finally, the whole picture looks like it's tilting (houses in BG).

bobt
28-06-2018, 1:40pm
Both good shots Bob. I probably have a slight preference for #2 as I like the human element and gesture and think there's a bit more 'story' to it. To my eye #2 also seems a bit 'crisper' somehow (more detail ?)

The image I'd submit would depend on whether the comp is decided by popular vote or by judges. For a popular vote comp I'd submit #1 as it's the 'classic' train shot with the billowing smoke which will have broad appeal. For a judged comp I'd go with #2 for the reasons I mentioned above and also because it's a bit different which might (?) appeal to a judge.

[#2 looks to lean slightly to the right, although could be an illusion]

Cheers.

Interesting. Usually I'm really hot on images that are not straight, but I didn't really see it here, but now three people have said the same thing. I've applied a bit of a correction so hopefully that'll fix that. I personally still like the grungy one, but also I probably like the other one with less foreground. I'll keep pondering my naval on both. Thanks! :D

jim
28-06-2018, 2:30pm
It's a tough call. The first is a clean effective composition, and a nice dramatic image. It's also a bit conventional.

The second is more interesting and unusual, but less effective. Right where the action is it goes a tiny bit muddy, plus it looks comparatively cluttered to me.

I actually prefer the second because I think it's more interesting. For a competition I'd enter the first.

farmmax
29-06-2018, 12:29am
While many people would prefer the first photo, it is a very standard view of a train. Standard views often don't attract the eye of serious judges.

Yes, if I had to hang one on my wall, I'd choose the first one.

If I was choosing one for competition (don't count popular vote as a competition), I'd work on the second one to make it more dramatic to grab the eye, and exhibit the second one. I don't even necessarily have to like my photo, so long as I think it attracts attention.

Hope it was alright to do a quick edit for one dramatic version. "Quick" meant 2 seconds to open Topaz Adjust and hit the Dramatic preset :D To be honest, the edit needs some refining - toning down the halo around the pipe, and perhaps lightening and increasing the detail the man etc....

Black and white photos are so flexible to work with.

bobt
29-06-2018, 9:31am
While many people would prefer the first photo, it is a very standard view of a train. Standard views often don't attract the eye of serious judges.

Hope it was alright to do a quick edit for one dramatic version. Black and white photos are so flexible to work with.

I don't mind people playing with my images at all. Some people get all uptight, but it's only a copy after all! 8*)

It's tricky choosing comp images because judges are unpredictable.

Monochrome is a bit of a cheat sometimes - you can get away with far more I think, and often an ordinary color image can go up a grade or two if it's turned into a mono!

davidd
01-07-2018, 9:34am
I think #1 is good, but I prefer #2 as it tells more of a story.

enseth
01-07-2018, 10:19am
I agree with Farmmax. #1 is your standard train shot however #2 is more likely to attract the judges eye.

Oakley
01-07-2018, 4:48pm
Sorry Bob I'd flip a coin as they both have unique qualities …

#1 with the smoke and those perfect tracks

#2 the detail and shine plus the added bonus of the worker on top

Good luck on the mono comp as you have my vote on both :nod:

bobt
01-07-2018, 5:05pm
Sorry Bob I'd flip a coin as they both have unique qualities …

#1 with the smoke and those perfect tracks

#2 the detail and shine plus the added bonus of the worker on top

Good luck on the mono comp as you have my vote on both :nod:

Well ..... that's about where I ended up. I did more back-flips than Pauline Hansen, and changed my mind every day. Eventually i decided to go for number 1 even though I actually like number 2 better. I just had more people going for that from all the people I asked. I'll probably get a judge who's a train phobic! :nod:

Liney
02-07-2018, 7:27pm
It's a tough one. I prefer the first because it has more textures and the whole movement thing gives me a great image to rove my eye over.

The second one has a personal touch but to me it doesn't appear to be evenly lit. It almost looks as it the top third has some form of graduated filter on it, contrast the colour between the side of the tank engine and the arm of the water tower and see what you think.

I still go with the first one, just because to me that covers the epitome of steam engines.

bobt
02-07-2018, 8:11pm
It's a tough one. I prefer the first because it has more textures and the whole movement thing gives me a great image to rove my eye over.

The second one has a personal touch but to me it doesn't appear to be evenly lit. It almost looks as it the top third has some form of graduated filter on it, contrast the colour between the side of the tank engine and the arm of the water tower and see what you think.

I still go with the first one, just because to me that covers the epitome of steam engines.

Yup ... the second one has a few variations - but that's just part of the HDR processing. The relative shadings are fairly faithful though. I agree about the whole epitome of steam trains though - that was a major part of my youth, and these photos bring back the smell of smoke and steam that my wife absolutely hates. :D

People either get steam trains or they don't. I once showed one driving past to my grandkids. They just shrugged and went back to what they were doing. :rolleyes:

Liney
07-07-2018, 3:06pm
I tell you one thing, the first one would make a cracking jigsaw puzzle...

bobt
07-07-2018, 3:46pm
I tell you one thing, the first one would make a cracking jigsaw puzzle...

Depends on your definition of "cracking" ! I'd be a mental case trying to do that. (Wait .... I may be a mental case already!) :D

ameerat42
07-07-2018, 4:10pm
Bob. After getting into town eventually today, I tell ya I'd take either one of these to the Sydney Trains!

bobt
07-07-2018, 4:33pm
Bob. After getting into town eventually today, I tell ya I'd take either one of these to the Sydney Trains!

And you'd have enjoyed the trip more even if you didn't even get there!! There's nothing like the sound and smell of a steam engine. (Unless you're my wife who thinks they're dirty smelly things. Actually, I think she thinks much the same about me! :nod: )

Geoff79
07-07-2018, 7:32pm
People either get steam trains or they don't. I once showed one driving past to my grandkids. They just shrugged and went back to what they were doing. :rolleyes:

I can’t explain this, but for some reason I just hate photos of trains. No idea why. Just a thing of mine.

But, for the purpose of your comp I’d have picked the second. You mention HDR... are they both HDR? I see a bit of what could be categorised as “haloing” on the first, but not so much in the second. But it’s pretty marginal either way.

I’d love to hear how you went, out of curiosity. :)

bobt
08-07-2018, 7:04pm
I can’t explain this, but for some reason I just hate photos of trains. No idea why. Just a thing of mine.

But, for the purpose of your comp I’d have picked the second. You mention HDR... are they both HDR? I see a bit of what could be categorised as “haloing” on the first, but not so much in the second. But it’s pretty marginal either way.

I’d love to hear how you went, out of curiosity. :)


Only the second one was HDR ... the other was just processed. Photos of trains are pretty dull, but photos of steam engines are full of memories for those of us fortunate enough to have ridden on them. There's nothing like holding on like grim death while a fully fired up steam locomotive roars along the track belching steam and smoke and attempting to hurl you into oblivion! trust me .... I've done it. :nod:

I won't know if it's a successful entry for another month yet, but I'll try and remember to let you know.

ameerat42
08-07-2018, 7:14pm
...while a fully fired up steam locomotive roars along the track belching steam and smoke and...

---BURPing cinders into your eyes!


...trust me ....I've...

copped it:eek:

I'll be looking fwd to the outcome, Bob:nod:

phild
09-07-2018, 9:46pm
#2 is my choice, IMO #2 captures the era of steam more so than #1

landyvlad
11-07-2018, 10:54am
Number one is pleasing but I prefer No 2 as I like the human element and the link with how they actual work as machines etc.
Not easy to put into words - but essentially the 2nd one isn't just a very good photo, it also tells a story.
Well done.

Reminds me I should so some more B&W stuff.