The 1st bit is interesting. You couldn't focus the stars? A 550D and live view? Doesn't it also have some sort of live view magnification? Did you set your camera to Manual and set focus to "infinity"?
"Normal" conditions don't really apply for astrophotography, so you have to take more control of your settings.
This is early in your astrophotography, and you got a fair result, not a bad one by any means. I'm only saying what to look out for. Another thing has occurred to me: did you take it from somewhere in Sydney? If so, you are really battling the
light pollution and unclear skies. As such, the result is as good as you can expect for a static
exposure as you took it.
Am.