If you don't get much response in this thread try another thread in the AP meet ups place ....... http://www.ausphotography.net.au/for...ay.php?173-VIC
It has gone a bit quiet there but you never know.

Don't be afraid to post a few photos and ask how they could be done better. You just may be doing better than you think you are. And if you aren't, I've seen plenty of people improve by posting, asking and learning from the advise they've received here.