Critique my 'Business' Card:::

[NikonUser]

Hi guys,

I'm looking at getting myself some Business cards done up.

Now I don't actually have a photography business and I don't think I'll be selling any of my work anytime soon... but when people see me out and about with all my gear they often ask if I have a website they can look at.

I'd like to be able to give them a card to direct them there.

What do you think of my design? I don't really have an 'arty' bone in my body and haven't ever done anything like this before, so am after some honest opinions and ideas on how to make it better.

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Thanks very much for any help
Paul

[NikonUser]

Just looking at it again...

Maybe I should swap my name and website address around and make the address more visible (make it white)?

[wmphoto]

You need to make both your name and the web address bigger. Phone number ??? Maybe move the fly to the left and put all your contact information in the box so it's all together.

[NikonUser]

Ok, I will give that a go.

I wasn't going to put a phone number on there as it is mainly to get people to go to my website and take a look at the galleries etc.

[NikonUser]

Ok, made my name and address bigger and put them all in the box.

I moved the box over to the left to balance it out a little more.

card2.jpg

Ot this one... but am not sure if the red works (I'm colourblind with green/red so really have no idea what it looks like to a 'normal' person )

card3.jpg

[junqbox]

I don't think you need to say Australian Nature Photography twice, just the once in the URL is enough and drop the www. The URL is the most important thing on the card because that's where you're sending the recipient to. You could also lose the 'By'. I also preferred the version where the text box was coming in from the side probably from the right, as it interferes with the fly less.

[NikonUser]

Good point about only saying Australian Nature Photography once.

My fiancee says that I shouldn't use the fly image as people (non-photographer people) won't warm to it very well. My idea was to have something different that people won't have seen before.

She prefers something like: (But definately with your 'only once' idea applied and the writing probably in a different colour)

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[junqbox]

I actually prefer the fly, stronger colours and detail most people wouldn't consider. I'm not a fan of the scripty typeface you're using, but that's more a personal thing.

[NikonUser]

Yeah I like the fly much better too.

Scripty typeface has gone, I don't like it either :-)

The latest versions:

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card-v7.jpg

[junqbox]

Nailed it. Send to print.

[wmphoto]

Why not do a 2 sided card with both versions?

[kiwi]

I like the fly
You need to put your name, phone and email address on it to be useful as a business or contact card....not everyone has access to a computer and you can then also use it to drop into competitions, give to aunty etc

[TaintedSoul]

If you don't mind chucking a raw version of the fly, I'll have a tinker if you like.

[NikonUser]

There is a high res jpg of a very similar photo of mine here:

Fly

Feel free to have a play

[TaintedSoul]

Okay here are some rough designs. I tried to keep with your general idea and aim for a clear and minimalistic design. Done in photoshop but if you decide you like one I can redo it in Illustrator so the printer doesn't crack a shit at you.

I spread changes over the variations so you can pick and choose what you like.

Plain.jpg

Name1.jpg

Name2.jpg

Border.jpg

In a former life I used to do this kind of thing as a business so even if they aren't what you want I was happy to kick the dust off.

Time for sleep now =)

[ricktas]

Continuity!

Use the same font on business card as website.
If you use the fly shot, consider changing you website background to green

[OzzieTraveller]

G'day all

Nice to see this co-operative project developing ...
I suggest that the name be increased & the phone number reduced in size - make them equal perhaps
Your name is important - that's what you want people to remember - so make it a bit more prominent

Q- do you want to see other APers business cards as comparisons????
Regards, Phil

[NikonUser]

Thanks for the efforts guys!

I really like #3 TaintedSoul. That's a really nice font as well!

I'd love to see other APers business cards for comparison.

One suggestion that I got from another person was that using an image as the full background doesn't look very professional. I'm not sure I agree with that (but don't have any experience in the business world...so don't really know much!). What are you thoughts?

Paul

[TaintedSoul]

Continuity!

Use the same font on business card as website.
If you use the fly shot, consider changing you website background to green

Generally I've only seen people concerned about continuity when it comes to company logos/fonts etc. I personally never had to colour match to a website though I can understand the concept and it makes sense.

After a quick look at the website, no font is defined. Didn't think about looking at 2am in the morning

G'day all

Nice to see this co-operative project developing ...
I suggest that the name be increased & the phone number reduced in size - make them equal perhaps

I've always done layouts in following order of importance:

1) Business name - The most important thing. Even if they lose the card, as long as they remember the name they can track you down.
2) Contact details - If they cannot contact you, then you will get no business
3) Personal name - Often not even included depending on circumstances. The business itself is more important than the individual as the business is the 'brand'.

That being said, this is my first design for a photographer and I realise their personal name/brand can be more important than the business.

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When I get a chance I'll try to incorporate the above into another draft. Just woke up so priority is to feed the worms

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Thanks for the efforts guys!

I really like #3 TaintedSoul. That's a really nice font as well!

Thanks. #3 was my personal favourite.

One suggestion that I got from another person was that using an image as the full background doesn't look very professional. I'm not sure I agree with that

It depends. I'll admit this is my first attempt at a photography business card, however while I was doing this as a business my personal card was a full photo/image with text overlaid. I never got comments about it looking unprofessional.

Your business card is designed to promote your business and your business is photography.

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For a little bit of morning humour, this is what happens when you get too pedantic about your business card -> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qoIvd3zzu4Y =)

[OzzieTraveller]

G'day Paul

So that this thread does not get overdone with other business cards ????? I will post to a new thread, hopefully others will post to it as well

Regards, Phil