Potential Brochure .. Thoughts ??

[bigdazzler]

Designed this as a potential brochure for me to give out to people ...Thoughts appreciated

[kiwi]

she doesnt look like you Dazza

[bigdazzler]

she doesnt look like you Dazza

I aint sticking my mug on there mate .. Im trying to make money

[oldfart]

she doesnt look like you Dazza

or does she

[kiwi]

good point, im not sure we have had a mug shot of the famous bigdazzler ? have we ?

[bigdazzler]

or does she

I bet she gets her way more often than I do mate ...

good point, im not sure we have had a mug shot of the famous bigdazzler ? have we ?

here ya go ... first one I found (funny that , most of them seems to have a bit of going on )

[kiwi]

loutish

[bigdazzler]

at least its not Speights

[I @ M]

Typical, cropped at the joints and a roof line running through the head, when will the boy ever learn.

I do like the brochure though, maybe make the web addy a little smaller so that it doesn't intrude into her and the overall look as much?

[Jules]

It's a good photo and all, but I'm not sure it's your best Darren. You've got other shots that have a bit more pizzazz which would make me want to take a second look.

[bigdazzler]

Typical, cropped at the joints and a roof line running through the head, when will the boy ever learn.

I do like the brochure though, maybe make the web addy a little smaller so that it doesn't intrude into her and the overall look as much?

I didnt take it though ... Im in it !!!

Yea ill fiddle around a little more with it ... keeps me occupied till the missus gets home and cooks me some food

[James T]

I suppose it depends what you want out of it, and who you're giving it to.. but the brochure doesn't really tell me what you do.

Do you do portraits of Joe Bloggs, fashion, faux fashion (shoot people who think they look like models), or anything inbetween or outside of that?

It's nice and simple though, which is good, better than being over-designed.

[bigdazzler]

Thats the front mate ... all further details will be on the back or inside, havent decided yet. Just started on it.

[Philr]

I like it, the idea is simple and its not cluttered. Is it just me or does she look like Michael Jackson?

[bigdazzler]

Is it just me or does she look like Michael Jackson?

huh ????

[Philr]

Just in the face.... I think its the nose..

[Tallstock]

The sad look on Josette's face, the crumpled grey shirt and the pink lipstick would not make me look any further.
Doesn't work for me. But what would I know?

[Allann]

Very simplictic, a lot to like, but I feel the brochure is not balanced. As already stated the url needs to be no bigger that the first line. But the lettering right in the middle doesn't work for me. How about on an angle from the top to the right, following the arm. That will leave a small spot in the bottom to include abn or something without cluttering the front. The colours in the lettering are good and complement the image.

[stoogest]

To be honest it doesn't do much for me. The positioning of the letters draws attention to the midsection of the model, which I don't think is her most flattering aspect. It's a good photo, but as Jules commented, I reckon there are better ones out there that you've taken to pick from.

Cheers!
Andrew.

[bigdazzler]

But what would I know?

I dunno .. what do you know ?? You tell me. Your feedback is appreciated but I find that comment utterly pointless mate.

Very simplictic, a lot to like, but I feel the brochure is not balanced. How about on an angle from the top to the right, following the arm. .

Thats a good suggestion Allan ... Ill try that mate. Thanks.